Exemplar 4:WWW: really detailed and specific denotation. Used a good range of examples and have clearly explained what each denotation connotes. Clear understanding of difference between connotation and denotation.
EBI: Try to describe the different techniques used in order to create the different denotations, and so connotations.
Exemplar 3:
WWW: Clear understanding of difference between denotation and connotation. Described in detail what the different pictures connote and good use of terminology. Also good inclusion of different theories
EBI: Add more terminology and use it more deliberately. Make sentences clearer.
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